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Chains

Pierce the heart, damn the mind
Love can make a person blind.
Loss of nerve, loss of speech
The sight of you just makes me weak.
The hint of your sent sends me reeling,
And I can't stand the pain I'm feeling.
I put myself out, everything on the line,
And you've shown me I can't make you mine.

You never were good for me
But that's so very hard to see
When all I want is you and me
Forever till eternity.
I think, perhaps, I'll ne'er be free
The chains of love have captured me.
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SineFundamenta Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
That's a lot different from the other works of yours that I've read, but I like it :)

The "damn the mind" part is awesome.
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littleshireling Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Thanks. This one's a little personal. ugh. lol

:hug:
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SineFundamenta Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Yeah...I feel that way about some of mine too, like I can't believe I put it out there for everybody to see.

Then I remember my audience is like you and two other people :D
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littleshireling Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
And I tend to spin them a bit. So they aren't directly related to my life. Though, this one comes real close.

Your work deserves a bigger audience.
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SineFundamenta Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Thank you. You should be getting paid for yours :)
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littleshireling Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Ha! If only...
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SineFundamenta Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
I know, I know...my novel's like my big escape plan. In my imagination, it's the next Twilight. In reality, it's on my hard drive :D
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littleshireling Featured By Owner May 12, 2010
lol Do you have a novel in the works?
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Kenny-E-Beck Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
it has a nice flow
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littleshireling Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010
Thanks, hun!
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