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Break away,

Into a million pieces,
A million birds flying on the wind.

Escape the mundane, through windows and doors.
Shed the shackles that hold you in place.

Clamor into the silence,
Shatter the oppression of noiselessness.

Breech the surface, turn the key,
Unwrap the bindings and let life breath.

Pick the locks on the doors of the prisons when the guards won't listen.

Set the flame and let it engulf your heart.

Escape.
Restart.
Break apart.
...

100 Themes Challenge #6 Break Away
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I really liked this there is some imagery here and strong feelings.
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littleshireling Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
Thanks! Much appreciated!
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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RestlessSands Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010
mmm....dunno why but this poem makes me think of summer...perhaps it's the letting go of it...hmmm, :heart:
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littleshireling Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
Thanks! I see what you mean. :hug:
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armymanski Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Escape
Restart
Break Apart

I like it:-)
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littleshireling Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010
Thanks so much. I appreciate it. :hug:
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armymanski Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You know what's funny, I give feedback on the works that catch my eye from the gallery, I keep coming back to this one even after I have given feedback on it because I love the title. Just thought you should know. :-)
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littleshireling Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010
You don't know how honored that make me feel.
Thank you so much for saying so. :hug:s
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armymanski Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome:-)
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