literature

When Lights Dim

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gaze through the glass pane
   you see into the future,
      gaining no insight.
Trying my hand at haikus. I have a few more but I don't want to spam you guys. I may post them over the next few days. Maybe.

Going to submit this to :iconlive-love-write:'s haiku contest.

Was going to call this "Hazy" but I like this title better. Thoughts?
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SineFundamenta's avatar
SPAM US. DO IT :D

Both of those titles are good, I think. I have a poem called Hazy too. It's not on DA or anything, but just thought I'd mention it :)